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| Forum - Better Photography Forum Index ~ Wildlife ~ love birds |
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Fri Jun 18, 2010 2:51 pm
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here are some shots of love birds. Critics welcome 
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Fri Jun 18, 2010 8:01 pm
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2nd shot is nicely captured.
Critical focus is missing in the first shot.
::Regards
Deepak Babbar
Canon REBEL XTi + Assorted Lenses
KATA DR-467
Manfrotto 190XPROB
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Sun Jun 20, 2010 10:44 pm
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good try , focusing is little less, contrast is less also,keep posting dear
asim |
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Mon Jun 21, 2010 12:18 pm
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I have my reservations on these two pics:
1. Composition wise..it does not work for me..it crops off parts of the bird/s and the first one is bottom heavy (visually).
2. These birds are not the type to fly away in a hurry .. so you have the time to work out your depth of field which is too small/narrow.
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Tue Jun 22, 2010 6:47 pm
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| in second u cud have taken more shots....anything better. |
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Tue Jun 22, 2010 10:08 pm
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Good try and the experts have clearly mentioned the shortcomings . Keep clicking.
TFS
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Fri Jul 30, 2010 12:17 pm
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